It's a little fluffy for me, but I'm more the electro house type. I'd say you need a little more filling out the midrange, its got a lot of floaty high and not a huge amount of bassline & mid to sit it on top of. Around the 1:15 mark you start to hit a little more power, but I think you back off too fast and don't continue with the momentum that you've built up. I'd drop some heavy driving beats right at 1:30, fill out what you start around 2:00 and it could be a killer track. What're you working in to produce it?